Post by ryanjericho on Jan 30, 2012 9:19:28 GMT -5
Things I liked:
*Colonel America is a pretty cool character. Hope he makes it through what happened to him in issue 2, but I can't see how.
*Battlestar seems to be the moral center of this group. I like that. I just hope he gets expanded beyond the sidekick role he's normally in.
*Bloodscream is pretty cool in these first two issues. I like how he's shown to not be a pushover. There's almost a horror movie vibe to him in these first two issues.
*I like how the roster is brimming over with power but its still a respectable squad. I think that'll make it easier to have your stories be compelling.
Things I would like to see worked on:
*The details in these issues are kind of skimpy. Looking at the issue online, you don't see many paragraphs extend beyond a single line. I think some more in-depth narrative work could help with that.
*Some explanation of HAMMER. It's obviously different in this world from regular Marvel so I think it shouldn't have been name dropped without some proper explanation of it.
*Colonel America is a pretty cool character. Hope he makes it through what happened to him in issue 2, but I can't see how.
*Battlestar seems to be the moral center of this group. I like that. I just hope he gets expanded beyond the sidekick role he's normally in.
*Bloodscream is pretty cool in these first two issues. I like how he's shown to not be a pushover. There's almost a horror movie vibe to him in these first two issues.
*I like how the roster is brimming over with power but its still a respectable squad. I think that'll make it easier to have your stories be compelling.
Things I would like to see worked on:
*The details in these issues are kind of skimpy. Looking at the issue online, you don't see many paragraphs extend beyond a single line. I think some more in-depth narrative work could help with that.
*Some explanation of HAMMER. It's obviously different in this world from regular Marvel so I think it shouldn't have been name dropped without some proper explanation of it.
